Comments : Slip away

  • 17 years ago

    by Tiff

    Awww, that poem, well i guess i can realate to it heaps. :) 5/5 from me, keep up da great workk :D

  • Reminds me of linkin park fer some reason.

  • 17 years ago

    by Alesia

    I like this poem. It's well writen

  • 17 years ago

    by Brittany C

    I loved this poem.5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by IdTakeABulletForYou

    I Can ttly relate. Great write.
    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by sexy_emo_kelsey

    This is my favorite because I have felt this way so many times I used to let what people said get o me I have attempte sucide 2 times and all because I get made fun of becaue I am not what people say are cute and my weight but I have stoped after realizing who gives a shit what other people say I am me and no one else

  • 17 years ago

    by loenly angel

    Omg...what is up with the whole sad poems there all good and all but man make some good one happy ones..this is good but sad
    bye
    love always
    momma to bee

  • 17 years ago

    by The Saber

    My life in words wow really depressing i love it all it needs is some blood splatter and this would be perfect

  • 17 years ago

    by myshiningstar14

    Goood depth and emotion here..so easy to go cliche with this type of thing but u avoiidded it vber ywell..nice stuff keep it up.

    lissa

  • Again great poem as always keep up the good work

  • 16 years ago

    by Intoxic8dBeautyxXHaNaXx

    "don�t" Fix this little error. But anyways, I'm astonished by how you are able to construct the poem and able to pick the right words to make it rhyme. Good job