Awww i just wanna give the little boy a big hug. i want him to be my pet :)!

but i ignore my pets :( coz im so mean

This is a really go start...lol....you could add so much more on the end of this and make it even better...dont give up on this poem keep goin with it....*Manda*

...rawr.. poor boy..

I really like this poem.. keep up ur gr8 work

Excellent poem another 5/5

Awesome poem Jason.
Very short.
anyway, neato.

Take care,
N-G-C-S

Aww thats so sad so i am going to find that boy and give him a big hug! lol but nice poem i really like it

Awww!!! ur so good! dang! u make me look bad gosh! i loved it
damaris
aka
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Its so sad
but written very well

OMG!!!!!!!
Great write. I appreciate the time and length, and language and rythm you put into this poem. It turned out well. Great write, and thanks for sharing.
5/5

Hehe ok i do like it =D

This one is really intense all it needs is a little bit of flow and it would be excellent

An amazing job !!!

Aww i like it show alot of detail keep it up

Aw jason its great
i have felt this same pain at a time in my life and i think thats why i have fell so hard for this poem...omg it was so real i love it

Omg dat is so sad! is it true?