Comments : A love that will never be

  • 17 years ago

    by donna

    Aww such a sweet but sad poem.. I think it flowed nicely but the last stanza I absolutely adored.. Well done 5/5 xx

    Thanks for Your comment also, it is very much appreciated :]

  • 17 years ago

    by DarkPoetess

    Awwwwwww...that was sooo sweet and i can relate....5/5 loved it!

  • 17 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    I accidentally clicked complain on someone's button, but I am not sure who it was and it might have been you. I really am sorry. I was trying to click something else and didn't. So sorry if it was you.
    Charisma*

  • 17 years ago

    by girl

    Twas shweet! so butuhfull **sniffle** it brought tears to my eyes. :]] keep it up 5//5!

  • 16 years ago

    by Mr M

    Very very good

  • 16 years ago

    by Woe

    Aww. its very good. i hate that feeling. keeping your feelings inside for fear of him not feeling the same... you never know if he could've been the one... it sucks.. this is a great poem though...
    -X-

  • 15 years ago

    by Danielle

    That was really cute..i think you should write more like that....liked the rymeing keep it up