Thanks baby i think im having that heart attack that im supposed to have now cause ur making my heart dance
(like cotten eye joe)baby you give me the same feeling *muah*

Aww so sweet, You can really feel the love in your poems Hun.. It flowed superbly and it rhymed really well too.. well done xx

Very good poem ciao, great flow and meaning behind it, 5/5!!! keep it up!!!

Aww. That's so sweet hun. Another great poem. Keep up the great work. 5/5 always for you. God Bless.

~*Tay*~

I Love this poem. It's outstanding. =]

I really like your poem... you do a great job of expressing your true feelings... i can relate to your poem... 5/5