Aww thats a nice poem was it for me?? lmao

Awwwh, this was so beautiful and pretty.

''so you're my heaven on earth
the reason why the sky is blue
you're everything this world's worth
you're my California view''

Was my favourite stanza, it made me smile.

The last staza was powerfully delivered, I really loved it, the rest of the poem was great, deep strong emtion, excellent flow and amazing word choice. Another job well done 5/5

Wow excellent piece. The flow is flawless and each line is having a strong link between each other and the whole poem. This is sure 5/5worth

Good poem

That was beautiful. You are such a talented writer. 5/5 from me.

You see heaven's missing an angel,
Because you're here with me,
But heaven can't have you back,
You're mine for eternity.

awww this is soo cuteee <3 i lovee this so much, especially the last stanza.... im supposed to be doing homework right now, but id much rather read your poems :P... i lovee you and thanks for writing this <3