You Stole My Heart (edited)

by Brittany C   Nov 26, 2006


What can I say,
you have stolen my heart.
From the very first time
my eyes a lightened upon yours.
You are the only one,
who has done this to me,
making me feel so over whelmed.

I didn't want it,
and I didn't expect it,
but you have found the key
to my sore heart
that I tried so hard to hide,

You have opened my heart,
and now love floods my heart.
I don't know what the future may hold,
I only hope that you are in it.

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  • 12 years ago

    by Rihanna

    I love this poem...I love the bit where u wrote

    You have opened my heart,
    and now love floods my heart.
    I don't know what the future may hold,
    I only hope that you are in it.

    ^^
    Love dat line
    Just beatiful hun
    5/5 for sure....

  • 12 years ago

    by Dave

    Very good, liked it alot

  • 12 years ago

    by Dave

    Very nice poem but i agree with above that something was missing

  • 15 years ago

    by tears i cry

    I didn't want it,
    I didn't expect it,
    You have found the key,
    I tried so hard to hide,

    i dont know why but this part makes me think
    alot of us try to hard to escape from the world
    we hide ourselves away so we cant get hurt
    this poem inspires me alot
    its so beautiful :)

  • 15 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    Ehhhh, I can't say I was too much of a fan of this poem, it was pretty cliche.. it had meaning to it, yet.. I really was looking for you to be more original with this.. its a short little thought, and I thought you could have expanded it on a lot more than you did here. I get how youre feeling, but dig deeper into your emotions and spill more of you onto the paper.. for us to see. Emotions are key in a poem, and if you portray them nicely and go in depth with them.. you are bound to have a masterpiece.. this poem however.. I saw that you kind of lacked it.. you shortened your emotions up in a really short poem.. it siad something.. but you needed to dig deeper. Make sense?
    Hmm. 4/5.