Not yourbest, but it rhymes well, the message was pretty good, all in all a 5/5 Good work.
-Ally

I liked the idea for this poem but you kept changing the rhyme scheme throughout the whole thing and it kind of threw off the flow to it... making it harder to follow.
"Its been 5 years since youve been gone"
youve = you've

I think if you read it over again and maybe tweak a few of the lines that sound a bit off then this poem could be amazing.. its still preaty good but you need a bit of work.