Comments : Roses on your epigraph [rondeau]

  • 17 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    Formed a wreath of sorrow crowned
    ((Not the correct syllables... Try something like: 'They' formed a wreath of sorrow crowned... Or.. Yeah, you get what I'm saying. It needs one more syllable.))

    This is wonderful. You did very well on this piece.. I wrote one of these and enjoyed it very much. This is my favorite, by far.. Just the message in general. Great job.

    xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex 5.5