Comments : Float Like A Butterfly

  • 17 years ago

    by Libby M

    This is a soft written poem... it's beautiful.

    Libby

  • 17 years ago

    by Sarahs death angel

    Like it it was short and sweet good job..
    -sda-
    P.S thanks for the comment on my poem i really appreciate it..

  • 17 years ago

    by ScarletHaze

    It may be short but it is quite sweet 5/5 xx

  • 17 years ago

    by Stephy

    Awww thats really sweet=)

  • 17 years ago

    by Mike G

    I've read several of your other poems and it's great to see what range you have in your writing ability. To go from dark and gloomy to something as simple and elegant as this is definitely a testiment to your character as a person. Great job.

  • 17 years ago

    by Lynn

    Very nice poem...it was very well written! keep up the great work

  • 16 years ago

    by David

    Yes short yet perfect. you spaced it out or it would have been really short.

    i liked the last line. the rain in the sea.

    5/5 David

  • 16 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    This is so pretty!
    Even though it's so short, I think you did a great job with this!

  • 16 years ago

    by aDORKable x3

    Very nice! Even though it was short, it still held meaning. I read your profile; amazing that everything you went through, you are still strong. God Bless You! Thanks for the comment!! :)

    Ciao~

  • 16 years ago

    by Cindy

    Very nice. Good imagery. I love your word choices.
    Take Care Cindy