Comments : Achromatic Feelings

  • 17 years ago

    by GoodMorning

    It's good, booger. =)
    really.

    i love you.
    and you know, if you ever need to talk, i'm here for you.

    E>

  • 17 years ago

    by Tammie

    I really like this. I think it's well written, and says alot for a small amount of words. I had to check the meaning of Achromatic.. lol. Anyway, good write. =] 5/5

    Tammie xo

  • 17 years ago

    by *Isolde*

    Its a excellent poem 5/5 keep it up.

  • 17 years ago

    by Darien

    I really liked the last line. It reminds me of a song. I don't remember which one, or who it's by, but it sounds so much like a song to me!! Anyways nice job Nat!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Stephanie

    I agree, very nice job. You were able to put such strong emotions into just a few lines. You're a very talented writer, keep it up! Loved it! 5/5

    Stephanie

  • 17 years ago

    by fearose

    I love this poem. It's really good. 5/5

    Sometimes the most simple words can mean the most.

    `Ange!a

  • 17 years ago

    by Tabitha Wacker

    Um...i'm not sure what to say, except, that i think it's good, and not to deep!
    have fun