Heartbeat and A Dying Mind

by Aken Sol   Nov 29, 2006


"Will you wait for me?"

A wind tunnel laced with black-tipped rose petals
strikes me and snatches the air from my lungs.
I would wait until time corodes my body whole.

"I might fade away by then."

The neon handwriting on the wall flutters away
before I could finish reading it.
I could only see the beginning and end.

"You won't."

She says it with such confidence.
A goddess.
A saint.
A prophet.
A liar.

"I just am!"

Weave words that comfort me.
Cover me in that plastic warmth.

"No, you're not."

Air blades rip off that blanket of lies from me
and I'm blown away to nothingness.

"Will you remember me?"

A single petal flutters down before my eyes
and I'm left with nothing else to say but...

"...no."

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  • 15 years ago

    by Deana

    I really enjoyed this,It was unique in its style,Basic honesty, a concept not often written about or practiced. I especially liked the ending,just a simple "no" says it all. Very well done!

  • 16 years ago

    by sarah

    Great poem...luv da originality n flows beautifully! =)

  • 17 years ago

    by hikarikitti

    Alright-tuh! ^^b

  • 17 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    Wow, very nicely worded totheter, and it shows great emotion.......
    I like the way you divided the lines, it gaves a great taste of reading, keep it up. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Killikana

    Wow your awsome. ...That covers it.

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