Comments : Beauty of Nature

  • 17 years ago

    by Ksusha

    It feels like its not complete. It seems like that the opening to a really great poem or story.

  • 17 years ago

    by ~me~

    I love this poem
    i really love it its sooo good
    it just makes me feel really happy
    and puts really nice pictures of summer in my head !~
    i want it to be summer sooooooo much, so this poem helps a bit
    i think this is amzing
    5/5
    me x x x x

  • 17 years ago

    by ellewen

    Im not returning the favor on the last comment you sent, im getting sick of one liners. IM not trying to be mean but please read the bottom of my profile... thanks

  • 17 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    This is really nice poem, you have done a great job with the words,
    you have created a nice pictures with the words, keep it up 5/5 from me.

  • 17 years ago

    by awww

    I liked the imagery... but i feel like incomplete? its like i wanna know whats next? is there more? i think you can add up to this one and make it more beautiful than it already is... ;) keep up the good work!

    ~angel~

  • Broad Imagery And a Useful Vocabulary, Every Word Complimented The Meaning And Flow Of This Poem, It Didn't Need Ryhme, It Had Talent

    Not To Mention You Gave Me Natureeeeeee! I Love Nature Poems & Your Awesome In Writing These..
    5.5? xoxo-Nikki-xoxo

  • 17 years ago

    by Matt Dahl

    I loved your poem keep up the great work

  • 17 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    Well done, my friend.
    Nature is a wonderful thing, and you portrayed this well throughout. It was short but it worked well, could do with a few more lines maybe, but well done
    xxxx

  • 17 years ago

    by TravisInABottle

    Very, very beautiful imagery. indeed, nature is a wonderful thing, and i enjoy reading about it. you did a great job with this poem.

    travis

  • 17 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    Nice use a words. I like the way you described everything in this so nicely. Great job.
    May I suggest- use punctuation other than commas.. It'll help the flow. =]

    xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex5.5

  • 17 years ago

    by Kristina

    Aww wow this is simply beautiful. it's short, but wonderfuly written. keep it up 5/5

    ~Kristina

  • 17 years ago

    by UnToLd TrUtH

    I liked this one really much it painted a image in my mind 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    I loved this, it was really sweet.
    The imagery was absolutely fantastic.
    I also enjoyed the wording and flow muchly.

  • 17 years ago

    by Lauren Waszkiewicz

    Great imagery!
    i think this is a really great poem. if flowed nice and was so sweet. the only thing bad i could say is that i want more! i think you could add onto this and makeit amazing. it flowed awesomely and it didnt need to rhyme! i think nature poems are your niche.

    x3 Lauren

  • 17 years ago

    by Lauren Waszkiewicz

    This is my last one for tonight. i gtg. ill do the rest tomorrow. =]
    `thanks again fo the comments. =]

  • 17 years ago

    by Allison

    I didn't think that this one flowed like the other ones. The second stanza wasn't as organized as the first one. It had great imagery though. *4/5*

    Alyson

  • 17 years ago

    by Bryan

    This is a very good nature poem, great job, i give this poem a 5/5!!! keep it up!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Choose xX Alex Xx Life

    Short but well expressed it was a lovely poem.

    xxx alex xxx (6)

  • 16 years ago

    by Kaila

    Oh please keep going!! The wording and imagery and everything was amazingly written what a splendid poem!

  • 16 years ago

    by Vanessa

    The imagery is good, butIt seem incomplete somehow. But still you did a good job 4/5