The Mysterious Blue

Hey,
I really enjoyed this poem. :)
I loved the imagery created and the magicalness about the poem. Your right in this poem, im sure i read osmewhere that we know mnore about space then we do about the ocean. So yeah it would be cool and yet very suprising if things like the Loch Ness Monster and mermaids did exist. The first stanza seems to be an introduction for your poem. The ship hasnt been dicovered and whatcould it hold? It makes the reader want ot find out what the ship holds. Then you go on to create this magical feel to it, you create an image of all these mytihical cretures. I have to say i loved it. The last stanza concludes the poem excellently, the mystery of the sea sounds really exciting. A lovely poem. Keep writing! Thank you for your comments! xx

Another greatly written poem. you are great.

Good, but not one of your better poems, i thought it was kind of elementary for you... but still, elementary for you is like totally advanced for someone else, so it was still a very good poem, i've just seen you write better... sry for the honesty, but still nice job

This was beautiful.
The imagery you used was just...wow.
I liked this because it was different in concept.

Oh! Now I want to go to the Ocean and scuba dive or something. Haha.

I loved this poem, and the rhyming pattern of it. It made it flow nice and smooth, such an easy and delightful read. Lovely job.