1 Tear Of Love

by ABake   Dec 2, 2006


I miss you
i love you
i need you
i want you
i cant live without you
and all this is true
and its all about you
you feel the same
but we just cant be together
certain things and certain days remind me of you
and i wonder if they remind you to
some days i go to dial your number and tell you something new
and for that quick second i think that were still together
and that makes me smile
remembering how much more happier i was with you
how lovely life was
all the notes we used to pass
and how together we used to walk to class holding hands no space in between
people don't understand the love that we have, thats why they don't know cos that would be a mistake letting it show
in a few days it would be our 1 year
and now as i write this down my face slides 1 single tear
not of sadness, not of joy
but of love

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  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    "I miss you
    i love you
    i need you
    i want you
    i cant live without you
    and all this is true
    and its all about you"

    Excellent opening. You can almost hear the pleading tone in this poem, it's so poignant and emotive.
    Brill wording as well hun, as always
    5/5
    *Gem*