Comments : 1 Tear Of Love

  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    "I miss you
    i love you
    i need you
    i want you
    i cant live without you
    and all this is true
    and its all about you"

    Excellent opening. You can almost hear the pleading tone in this poem, it's so poignant and emotive.
    Brill wording as well hun, as always
    5/5
    *Gem*