Comments : Never Heal

  • 17 years ago

    by in spite of love

    I really liked this poem. It's really deep.

    Just to show her that I care
    To show that I care SO much
    to let her see a new star shine
    every second that we touch

    thats my fav. stanza... well, 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Shad0w0faPh30n1x

    This is very good david, alot of emotion in this poem, i give it a 5/5!!! keep it up!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    I love your poem. Your feelings really come through in your words. Great job!

  • 17 years ago

    by Tormented

    Wow! Awesome poem dude! I haven't read your stuff for quite some time and man its Getting better and better!
    It's like when you write your poems i can feel the pain, even if it hasn't happend to me [Does that make sense? lol probably not] anyways nice flow, nice rhyme nice rhythm! Overall i loved it! Well done 5/5

    Keep SMiling
    `*-Tormented

  • 17 years ago

    by Liz

    Aww, David!! This was so sad, but sweet at the same time. I loved it!! And Tormented is right, you ARE getting better. Lol. Stay up!! Love ya,

    -Poetess

  • 17 years ago

    by Mimi

    This is a relly good poem but i think you could chose different wording to make your point stronger in the 1st 2 stanzas. but i absoloutely love the end. very nice job!

  • 17 years ago

    by myshiningstar14

    Nice rhyme i love your styles so much,...great work so much heart in it. comemnt mine i have to many to add ive been writng so much but nvr posted them so please read the ones u havent and comment tsm.

    lissa

  • 17 years ago

    by Denise

    Oh and what is this based on?

  • 17 years ago

    by myshiningstar14

    The realness burns through here,. its sad yet so refreshing..keep up the great jobb.

    lissa