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by masked_senses   Dec 4, 2006


The pain i feel for having...
The chain i chose to tie myself...
i picked a different night...
And a different rain...
To run through my veins...
I`m now left with insomnia...
With a distance tearing me
down...
With wings i can never use...
To came near you...
Coz i fly with them...
only with you...All the tar filled my eyes again...
And i ask you...Is there any replacement for punishment...
Can i hold your hand instead of the dagger...I guess i can...
But it is only a permanent...
his mask will cover my face again...
Coz he felt my pain...
He felt my sorrow...
He likes her rain...
No fear for tomorrow...
Please come to touch you...
to feel you...to keep my trembling heart calm...
please come...

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  • 16 years ago

    by Reapers ZeitGeiSt

    Tha simfonisw gia to oreo style grapsimatos...gamato kai me ti kali enia poli piasariko..pragmatika me sigkineis yanako
    keep it up! :p

  • 16 years ago

    by Bug1219

    I love this style of writing its really good keep it up

  • 17 years ago

    by broken reflection

    Wow! just... wow! 5/5 u have such a unique style keep it up !!!
    :)

  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    "Can i hold your hand instead of the dagger..."

    That line got to me. It was so bittersweet and such a hopeful plea.
    Excellent poem
    5/5
    *Gem*

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