Comments : Glowing Embers

  • 17 years ago

    by Bonnie Rose

    I like the structure and the meaning a lot..the title is v intriguing

  • 16 years ago

    by Italian Stallion

    Nicely written, short and nice choice of words. I thought the structure was a little off, I think it would be better if you broke it up into stanzas, but that's just my opinion.

    Peace, Joe

  • 16 years ago

    by Sherry Lynn

    Very vivid. the imaginary seemed to come alive off the screen.

    The flow went well also.

    --Sher