Comments : Guiding Angel

  • 11 years ago

    by Roses and lilys

    Very good poem. I loved it. The only thing I saw that you might want to chance is that in the third line of the second stanza at should be to. Other then that this poem is great. You are a great poet. Keep up the good work:)

  • 11 years ago

    by Kristina

    You mean more than the world at me
    -i think you meant "to" not "at"

    aww this is really sad. i'm sorry if this is true.. i'm not sure who it's about, but you did a great job. 5/5

    ~Kristina

  • 11 years ago

    by Suffering Soul

    Heartbreaking. beautiful.

  • 11 years ago

    by Tite

    Im goin to start out by sayin "En Memoria de Lillian (In Memory of)". Of course I didnt know her but I show luv 2 ere body. I really liked dis poem. I felt da same way when 3 of my homeboys were murdered n 1 commited suicide b/c of it. NE wayz stay strong n keep ya head up.

    Stay Playa,
    SC

  • 11 years ago

    by Tite

    BTW I couldnt help but to laugh when I read one of ur commentz n ur name waz "Do dogs think in English?" LOL!!

  • 11 years ago

    by UnToLd TrUtH

    Im sorry about your loss. This is a really good poem and I gave it a 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Lost Soul 691

    Two lines really stand out for me:

    my eyes will always look for you
    but it's my heart that sees

    One never stops looking, for one more glimpse!

  • 10 years ago

    by Jenni

    This was a very touching poem. everything flowed well together and the rhyme scheme was swell as well. great job!

  • 10 years ago

    by Cella Bella

    Wow, this is a really heart felt write. The flow in this poem was flawless. You seem to write with great emotion and it shows in the amazing poems you write. Wonderfully touching read. 5/5

    marcella

  • 10 years ago

    by SmileeItsBritt

    This is so sweet. im sorry for your loss. Well expressed...

  • 10 years ago

    by Anonymous Angel

    Hey,
    is sad and sweet at the same time, im sorry for you loss, i love your choice of words.
    kisses stephanie

  • 10 years ago

    by Robert

    The syntax was abit off in this which left the floww not sit well. The message was strong however and was a great tribute to the person you wrote this for I am sure they would be proud Good Job. This is the thrird Poem Plot121

  • 10 years ago

    by Cotton Candy Clouds

    Great job on the poem : ) its deep i love it <33 tabi

  • 9 years ago

    by Troxden

    Touching poem.
    What happened?

  • 1 year ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    I'm sorry for your loss. Especially hard to deal with at a young age. Considering this was a few years ago. It is always hard to lose someone. I hope you still think of this person often :)

    • 1 year ago

      by IdTakeABulletForYou

      Yes, this is a prettier poem of mine, my dad actually read it at the Funeral Service for my grandmother.

      Thanks for reading!