This is a GREAT poem, I give it a 5. I have several about meth if u'd like to read them. I am a recovering meth head myself and meth takes away your ability to feel or care. Good luck to you and your family and GOD bless you all.
Flow was choppy and not exactly great but the emotional quality was awesome. It's full of what is almost despair and sadness. Other than flow problems it was a cool write. The second stanza is my favorite. The emotion is well done.