Comments : LeAvE...

  • 17 years ago

    by silence

    I really like this one as well. I like the style of writing. I only wish I could write like that. Keep writing :)

  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    "And as you walk out, my soul has left me. (You were my other half that made me whole and without you I feel incomplete...)"

    A very powerful ending, it really gets the point across how you feel at the end.
    I agree with Silence. This style is excellent, i haven't seen one like this before.
    Well done
    5/5
    *Gem*

  • 17 years ago

    by Bridgette

    I really liked this. You definitely portrayed your emotions very well in this and I think that your thoughts that you put in parentheses gave the poem a very nice and sad effect. Great job on this! 5/5
    And thank you for your comment on my poem :)

  • 17 years ago

    by LovinMyLife

    I LOVE IT!!!!! You are soooooo good! And I'm NOT just saying that! I love love love your poems!
    Thank you so much for your comment on my poem it means so much to me!
    Burning~Wings

  • 16 years ago

    by RavishingEruption

    Really good way to explain a break up or seperation
    amazing job! i loved it!!