Porcelain Doll

by IdTakeABulletForYou   Dec 6, 2006


Little tiny heart of gold
that broke so young and bled so fast
little tiny fragile eyes
emit the tears of glass

porcelain features, so fragile they are
frozen with a painted frown
blushing cheeks and bright red lips
-- you're bound to hit the ground

emptiness that lay's inside
yet outside seems so full of life
perfect hair and perfect face
-- the doll who's bound to take your place

heartless demon. soul-less wretch
dolls as perfect as can get
meaningless love with cold, glazed eyes
there is no hope, there is no life

never said a word yet glassy eyes must say it all
never heard a word you said, it pretends it's a doll
...

porcelain doll that has its wings
that sees the sky and tries to sing
relinquishing havoc among those that lost
you're bound to turn into a porcelain doll...

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  • 1 year ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    Wow.. Very well written S.
    Beautiful!

    • 1 year ago

      by IdTakeABulletForYou

      Hehe, thank you :) I don't think I used the word "relinquishing" right, but oh well. Glad you enjoyed it!

  • 10 years ago

    by Reminders Torture

    This poem was so sad.
    the imagery was good.

    porcelain doll that has its wings
    that sees the sky and tries to sing
    relinquishing havoc among those that lost
    you're bound to turn into a porcelain doll...

    i just love this stanza.
    very well written
    best wishes
    and take care.
    emmeline

  • 10 years ago

    by David

    Nice topic. how you made the doll interwine into the poem. very clever.

    5/5 David

  • 10 years ago

    by Jenni

    Wow. this poem was superb. the language you used was excellent and the ending was wonderful as well. 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    Oh wow..
    This was beautiful.
    Really sad and heartwrenching, but a pleasure to read.
    I think you did a wonderful job on this.