Comments : WIDDERSHINS

  • 17 years ago

    by Melissa

    Oh Gary, I really felt this piece deeply.

    "for stagnation is self destruction"
    ^^ beautifully worded and so true!
    I'm glad this poem ended with a sense of hope, realizing the problem is always the first step. I know I've been there, am there at times. This is an amazing honest piece of poetry, I love it!

  • 17 years ago

    by debbylyn

    Ahhh yes...sweet nostalgia. I've often wished to be 25 again....just with my 49 year old brain....guess we can't have it all! I thoroughly enjoyed this!
    Debbie

  • 17 years ago

    by ben thompson

    Very good write gary I enjoyed this one