You have got to be winding me up?!?!
That poem is tremedous, seriously amazing. So deep and emotional, full of despair, you can tell you really gave it everything you got. But you have got to pick yourself and up and tell yourself you are gonna hold on becuase it gets better. And it really does. I have given people my heart and they have trodden all over it and jumped up and down on it too for good measure (lol). But it gets better, it really does - you just have to believe and keep pushing on. You will see. Anyway amazing poem. Please dont finish it and just write another one.

Kelly
xx

"I have to save your heart,
Your soul, your life too,
The only way i can do this,
Is to die for you."

That stanza just choked me up. The whole poem was just so sad and upsetting..
Please never finish it.
*Gem*

Aww this poem is so sad but it is really good, so full of emotions that the poem jumps out to the reader. But let me tell you something I know how hard it is to be going through something like this but the thing that helps me the most is coming on here and posting my poems and getting comments on them. It lets me know that people do care and understand what Im going through. Even though I write sad poems all the time, it just helps me release some tension, but I think no matter what I do to try to show him that I care things will still be the same so its not worth it, so be strong because things will get a little easier it just takes time. I've read some of your poems and your a really great writer, so I look forward to reading more, oh and you can email me whenever you like if you need someone to talk to.

Hun.. keep hanging on... its like life is the monkey bars... you start to slip so you want to bail but if you just keep goign and dont stop you always make it to the other side. just keep pushing your way through. Thank you for the comment. it was for my best friend... her nicknames superstar for a reason lol

Awww it was so sad and upsetting, even though it is unfinished it is still really really good i loved reading it, but this stanza,

"I have to save your heart,
Your soul, your life too,
The only way i can do this,
Is to die for you."

just made me feel so much for you as i read it =] goes to show how difficult feelings can actually be really but great poem hun

~*~Jen~*~

This got my complete attition. it flows so well and deep. near the end made me think. i like how u made it soo detailed. this poem seems that ur talking twords one person. ur poetry is amazing. PLZ keep writing
XOXOXOXOXO

This poem was really sad.i loved it.

Been accused of lying,
Of plotting and deceit,
Called things unimaginable,
And bought down to me knees.

My last hope on this earth,
Was to feel a love thats true,
To have someone near,
Who would love me too.

this stanza were perfect.i can realate to it so much.loved it.

and thnx for the comment.
nd thnx for commenting my nic too
:P
lol

best wishes

I love it its so meaning full
i love it so much 5/5 :)

You just penned it so beautiful, sad but written well. thanks for sharing :)