Comments : Teasing

  • 16 years ago

    by Wallace

    Excellent poem, I really liked it, the flow was god and it was full of meaning, good job.

  • 16 years ago

    by Vegetable

    This is very nice. You kept a really sympathetic tone through out the whole thing. You compared the pain of emotion/verbal teasing beautifully. The only suggestion I have is, although your word choice was good, the rhymes were a bit predictable. Overall great job.

  • I like this one, this is really good!xoxo