Comments : IM NOT LISTENING

  • 17 years ago

    by Brittney Follett

    Great Job! This poem is almost hateful.. It was great.. I deffinitally love your last stanza. The only problems i found was:

    Ive listened to you, **I've
    And when i needed to talk, ** I
    Never listen to a word i say, ** I

    Other than that IT WAS AMAZING!

    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Allison

    The flow of the last stanza didn't seem to fit in with the rest. Keep up the good work though. *4/5*

    Alyson

  • 17 years ago

    by Michelle18

    Excellent poem!!!! i feel the same way right now...love it!