Hehe that was sweet and cute and very well written. i l0ved it =] great j0b. never stop writing =] xx

"I need your sweet touch
To get me so high
Just a glimpse of your smile
And my heart can fly"

I love this stanza! It really pretty much pulls together what the whole poem means! Great job sweetums!
xoxo

I don't know why you're so hard on yourself! I loved this one too. I think you're one of the very few on here that can capture my attention and then keep it for the entire poem with EVERY poem. Great job, Gem! And thank you so much for the comment on my poems, so sweet! = )
~Midnight Sun

This one was sweet, but yeah, not your best. I know this only because I read them ALL. lol Ok, most of them. But I have one called Temporary Fix, which I'm sure you've read, too. But it reminded me of that in the first stanza. LOL Good job! Hope you can conquer writer's block. But hey, if this is writer's block and it's still better than 90% of what you read on here, than can I have some too??? lol
Charisma*

I'm sorry i dont have any cures for writers block... I'm current;y exerencing my own and cant think of anything to write... hope it works out... Oh yeah. 5/5 good job.
sincerely
Katlyn

Nicely written.5/5

Great poem. Keep up the good work.

~K3!$3Y~

I know what you mean this peom was VERY VERY well writtenadn u avoid cliches which is so hard withthis type of thing...awesome job :) :)

lissa

For the past couple minutes i have been reading a couple of your poems and to say that you are a great writer will be a understatment i think that you are a beautiful writer and so much more great job keep it up its music to my ears

Writer s block hun? no way this poem is absolutly amazing in more ways then one. . . .great peom. . . .
samaa
xoXOxo

I thought it was a sweet poem I love the thought of being in love.I have definitely been addicted to someone.

Well, for writer's block it's really good. i've read two of your poems so far and i can already tell that you are an awesome writer. kudos!!

I really like this poem

:) one of my fav poems!
LOVE IT!