Comments : Wildflower Honey

  • 17 years ago

    by x.Athame.x

    Wow, a long read, but very nice. Made me smile. Great job on it, 5 of 5.

  • 17 years ago

    by Bridget

    Wow i love it! that poem is absolutely amazing! except that part where you said the bees wanted 2 eat the pollen i think u should maybe change that to nectar cos i don't think bees eat pollen cos thats what fertilises the egg... otherwise absolutely fantastic one of my favourite reads!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    This is great! I am still laughing! Excellent job on this one! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Stephanie

    Fantastic & Very Original.
    I keep seeing this imagery flashing through my mind. Quite funny at times. =] Very long but you're right it was worth the read. The flow was great the vocabulary was amazing! =]

    I would like to thank you for you honest opinion on my poem. It helps a lot in becoming a better writer and I appreciate (sp?) it a lot. So, thank you! =]

    A great write, keep it up! 5/5

    Stephanie

  • 17 years ago

    by debbylyn

    Lol...this was great...very original and funny. Great job....full of vivid imagery.5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    I loved this.
    It was original and I also found it quite amusing, particularly the last stanza.
    I think you did a very good job on this.

  • 17 years ago

    by Just Lisa

    Aww.. that was sooo cute! I liked it! Keep writing . . .
    *Just Lisa*