I loved the repetition at the end. It really gets the point across what you see in the mirror.
Short stanzas really add to effect as well. It makes the reader sit up and pay attention.
Well it did with me =)
I liked this one. Well done =)
5/5
*Gem*

Repetitiomn worked well at the end.. i like the three contrasting persona's you maintained through out.. nice work

Yup definitely got to agree with the repition at the end! that was really good something I've never actually thought to use in my poems.. i like the idea of this poem its something different i really like it!

Nice poem, with a great message. keep it up.5/5

Nice job! It was very original, but most of your poems I have noticed are very original.
You had a great flow and I could understand the meaning that you were trying to get across. Wonderful write.

Also, I loved the repetition at the end. It added a little something extra to the poem! Keep it up! 5/5

Stephanie

I liked this.
My favourite part was the repetition you used, I think it made the poem more powerful.
The other reason I liked it was because it was original and unique in concept.

Great job, there's a whole story there, in just a few words

awesome

I liked this poem. I like the way of seeing three diffrent people in the mirror. Very good job!