The Stranger

by Darien   Dec 13, 2006


The Stranger

You were just a stranger lying next to me
I couldn't tell if you were the girl I loved
The glowing in your eyes had disappeared
And replaced with something I had feared

Guilt be the demon that claimed your actions
With your empty soul I saw right through you
Nothing hid the fact that something was wrong
There is no use lying because I knew all along

Your quivering lips and your nervous heartbeat
Moisture seeped through pores over your brow
The song of deceit sounded muffled as you spoke
Words formed so carelessly as you begin to choke

Curiosity grew within me as lies poured out
Your stories change quick like old folk tales
You came home late and thought I was asleep
I heard a man's voice and went down to peep

His arms were wrapped around your waist so tight
Kissing and giggling as you said your goodbyes
How could you hurt me and still say I love you?
Well believe my lie when I say I love you too

You threw everything away for only ten minutes
Years of true love down the drain without a care
I packed my bags and left you that same night
From here I knew everything would be alright

After all these years it was as if I never knew you
Everything that happened in the past I put behind
But anytime I think about you all I can ever see
Is the stranger that once laid right next to me

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  • 17 years ago

    by Brigitte

    Wow that was a very unique way to put a break up... normaly poems like these are just going on and on about how broken their heart is.....Your's tells a very different tale...I loved it and it was so unique and discriptive! The ending was PERFECT.

    Moisture seeped through pores over your brow
    ^^ I think this would sound better if you said "Moisture seeped from the pores above your brow"

    AWESOME write... I loved it 5/5

    Your stories change quick like old folk tales
    ^^ohh very good discription

  • 17 years ago

    by TheWorldFellNUWerentThere

    Now this one is amazing. I loved how you got everything put together. Just speechless though. Great write.~Keep up the great writing. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni

    I've already commented on this poem, but I just wanted to let you know that this one is definately my favorite of yours!

  • 17 years ago

    by w!th0utyou

    This is a very good poem, 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by dora

    Oh man i love reading ur poems. there always written so good!! i thought u did a great job. very touching piece. xx