Im In Love...

by ABake   Dec 15, 2006


You say I'm to young..
but i know how i feel
And this love is real

You say it wont last...
and it will just be another part of my past
But sorry your wrong

I wont let you tell me how and what i can feel

I love him and he loves me to
And that is exactly how i know it is true
You don't need proof to know that I'm in love

SO just go away,
you cant change my mind
So right now all i can say is....
I'M IN LOVE!!

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  • 16 years ago

    by Laurenf7

    Great
    love it x

  • 16 years ago

    by Miu

    Ahh something so pure and sweet. Also, showing with your confidence here, I like it in poem when writer shows off her own additude. The theme of this poem problebly touches everyone who been or are in love, so that is important too. And you have to fight for what u believe in! :)
    Amazing work on this, really cute poem, easy to read.
    5/5 Keep up!

  • 16 years ago

    by MischieviousMya

    Awww short yet sweet and simple.
    i can totally relate.
    great write hunnn =]]

  • 16 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    I like the last stanza it sums up the story of the poem :) Flow was smooth, good job

    You have some errors.

    you (cant) change my mind
    = Can't

    And don't forget to capitalize the I's =)
    ^^ Some people give '4' even though the poem is good if you forgot to capitalize the I's.

  • 16 years ago

    by sweet_rebellion

    Preach it sista'!! I had a boyfriend that I KNEW I was truly in love with. We didn't work out but I will never forget him. I was forbidden to see him because my father had said "He's evil, and not the one for you....it's just puppy love" I still saw him behind his back, but after awile he couldn't take it anymore and broke up with me. If fate is for us to be together, we will meet up again in the future. Keep writing, beautiful job!

    sweet_rebellion

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