It can't be fixed this time (Nobody's Someone re-done)

by Angel Of Death   Dec 16, 2006


And as she watched as her world ended;
Watched her man walk from her touch;
She bit back her defenceless words,
And returns to a state that she knows too much.

She never saw it coming,
Though people warned her from the start,
Love is but a cruel mans game,
It's intention, to tear you apart.

She sits in her empty house,
Where there's no one to hear her cries,
She's in no state to think rationally,
So she remains on the floor where she lies,

She wants to end the pain,
But nothing has worked before,
As her body drains her blood, out her arm and down the drain,
She hears a click to her previously locked door.

It's either her mum or best friend,
Both of which have a key,
She knew if they found her in her state,
Neither would let her be.

Her eyes begin to close,
The razor falls to the floor,
Her friend hurries to her side,
She knows what she did it for.

She lays there conscious,
Sadly awaiting death,
But even after all her blood loss,
She can't manage to get to her last breath,

She thought it'd take the pain away,
But it brought on more with her friends crying,
She wants the world to fade away,
But yet she still isn't dying.

She can't escape this pain,
The world isn't letting go,
Her blood is flowing down the drain,
She wonders if her man even knows,
Though it's obvious he wouldn't care,
She wanted him to be the one to find her there.

Her friends given up,
She can't feel her touch,
Once again, she's all alone,
Though this time she left them.

Was he the cause of this?,
Or maybe this was one thing she couldn't take,
Had he have foreseen the future, he wouldn't have done it,
No one can be so cold
His reasoning he forgot to mention,
But if someone ever loved her, she was never told.

.xx.

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  • 10 years ago

    by silvertung69

    A broken heart ive yet to feel.but when i do that pain just read. ill feel it too.

  • 10 years ago

    by I Love You Dominick

    Awsome poem that is what i feel like some of the times!!bc its hard to loe someone and them not love you back

  • 11 years ago

    by xBxRxOxKxExNx

    I luvd this hun xpcly the last line... it really sends out the message

  • 11 years ago

    by Jessica

    This is a great poem and so true. my x bf tol me he wanted 2 be my sons dad and then i calle him and some b**ch answere an told me that they were naked. happend 1 day befor v-day. made me so mad. but no matter who u r dont waste crying over a guy exspecialy when they left u. it just means ur better. thanks for the comment on mine. just wrote that 0 mins ago and put it on here 5 mins ago. keep ur head up life will get better. there is 1 man out there that will treat u right. dont stop looking

  • 11 years ago

    by Jessica

    This is a great poem and so true. my x bf tol me he wanted 2 be my sons dad and then i calle him and some b**ch answere an told me that they were naked. happend 1 day befor v-day. made me so mad. but no matter who u r dont waste crying over a guy exspecialy when they left u. it just means ur better. thanks for the comment on mine. just wrote that 0 mins ago and put it on here 5 mins ago. keep ur head up life will get better. there is 1 man out there that will treat u right. dont stop looking