Comments : It can't be fixed this time (Nobody's Someone re-done)

  • 11 years ago

    by Shortii3

    I love ur quotes. keep i t up! check out some of my quotes too! :)
    thanks
    ShOrTiE

  • 11 years ago

    by La La xx Beth

    Not bad... its kind of depressing but i can pretty much relate. i love the part "Love is but a cruel mans game". its very true. keep up the good work and comment my poems too.

    ^oh it rymed :]

  • 11 years ago

    by TheWorldFellNUWerentThere

    5/5. Wow so good! I could feel the hurt and the pain in this poem. I did a poem called Runaway Moon. You can chek it out if you want.

  • 11 years ago

    by David

    This is the same. this is so beautifully written. i love it!

    a 5 from me again. you are quite the poet. keep writting.

    David

  • Wow!!! I absolutely loved this poem. It brought back memories for me. I know what it's like. I have cut before because of a guy that I thought loved me. This poem is sad but very very good. Great job.. 5/5 for sure.
    Crystal

  • 11 years ago

    by The lil angel

    Wow nice poem i liked it...and check out my poems and comment them well thanx!!

  • 11 years ago

    by Jessica

    This is a great poem and so true. my x bf tol me he wanted 2 be my sons dad and then i calle him and some b**ch answere an told me that they were naked. happend 1 day befor v-day. made me so mad. but no matter who u r dont waste crying over a guy exspecialy when they left u. it just means ur better. thanks for the comment on mine. just wrote that 0 mins ago and put it on here 5 mins ago. keep ur head up life will get better. there is 1 man out there that will treat u right. dont stop looking

  • 11 years ago

    by Jessica

    This is a great poem and so true. my x bf tol me he wanted 2 be my sons dad and then i calle him and some b**ch answere an told me that they were naked. happend 1 day befor v-day. made me so mad. but no matter who u r dont waste crying over a guy exspecialy when they left u. it just means ur better. thanks for the comment on mine. just wrote that 0 mins ago and put it on here 5 mins ago. keep ur head up life will get better. there is 1 man out there that will treat u right. dont stop looking

  • 10 years ago

    by xBxRxOxKxExNx

    I luvd this hun xpcly the last line... it really sends out the message

  • 10 years ago

    by I Love You Dominick

    Awsome poem that is what i feel like some of the times!!bc its hard to loe someone and them not love you back

  • 10 years ago

    by silvertung69

    A broken heart ive yet to feel.but when i do that pain just read. ill feel it too.