Comments : Ripped Paper Hearts / I Will Never Belong To You

  • 10 years ago

    by ChaosHarbour

    This is so pretty. I loved it and it explains exactly what I feel way to often. Would you mind checking out some of my poems?

  • 10 years ago

    by Bryan

    This is a very good poem ciao, 5/5!!!thanx for the comments, i miss yall too, i will be back as soon as i can.

  • 10 years ago

    by Virna Estella

    Awww.. this one's full of emotions ciao.. 5/5 -virna

  • 10 years ago

    by donna

    Aww what a sad poem.. Full of emotion and hurt.. It flowed excellently.. well done 5/5 xx

  • 10 years ago

    by Twisted Heart

    My ripped paper heart
    Torn right at the crease
    The little rips and previous tears
    Still hurt, to say the least

    Loved those lines. Very well done. A bit sad, could feel your pain and sense your tears.

    Jeannie

  • 10 years ago

    by .K.i.T.t.Y.

    Beautiful poem girl. I loved it. So sad, so sweet. but this time i found things you could fix:
    When I'm not allowed in their world- leave it at THEIR'S, adding world again doesnt make it flow as well.

    You don't mean to be so mean- you should use another word for mean, like cruel or something along those lines.

  • 10 years ago

    by Mommy And Me

    Holy wow... temperarly loss of words. i really liked this one... touched me close to home. you are a great writer ciao and your emotion really shows through in the poetry you write.

    -/2 Terra

  • 10 years ago

    by Michelle18

    Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww this is so so soooooo sad! i almost cried reading it because i know what your going through....i have the same feeling...great job!

  • 10 years ago

    by Wasted Fake Smiles

    Woah. im speechles. i loved this! the detailing was AMAZING and i can totally relate to this. wow. 10/5 if thats somehow possible lol. keep up the amazing work.

  • 10 years ago

    by xPerfect Chaosx

    This poem is so gut-wrenchingly emotional, I totally know how you feel!!! It's a wonderful poem. The flow is awesome! Thank you for the comment on my poem! 5/5!!!!!!!!!
    Much Love,
    <3 Danielle

  • 10 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    That last stanza...what a beautiful, perfect ending.
    I absolutely adored it.
    This was so wonderfully written, just like all the others I have read.
    How hve I not come acorss your poetry before??!

  • 10 years ago

    by isabel

    Absolutely beautiful...

    *isabel*

  • 10 years ago

    by Kenny

    Nice poem! Love It!!

  • 9 years ago

    by Amy

    To every person who's always been there for someone else who never felt as close.

    I hate seeing people who've always been by someone's side and watching as one day their feelings change to ones of affection, only to see the look on their heart as their special someone pulled a 'I always thought of you as a sister' on them.

    amazing, you hit the nail dead on! much love for this poem!

  • 9 years ago

    by XBrokenxDreamsX

    Excellent poem. I know exactly what that feels like. You poem says all the things I never could. Great job! 5/5

  • 9 years ago

    by Aliah

    Damn, this poem was really nice.
    i could feel the pain
    so true, damn true!

  • 2 years ago

    by allex0r

    Beautiful! so on point :)