Sign My Fate

by ShadowedPhoenix   Dec 17, 2006


I loved you,
With everything I possessed-
And you stole it from me,
Now I have nothing left...
Just a mask and a broken heart
You didn't have punish me,
for loving you so much!
I don't see what was so wrong
About you and me being 'US'.
You know I watched you turn away
And it felt like,
someone was tearing at my bleeding flesh...
Like long bony hands of hate
Ripping my heart out of my chest!
I heard you tell you loved her,
Knowing I would hear.
The pain of hearing your hate,
Carves away my skin-
With a blunt acidic knife...
It carves away my dreams.
And I'm watching you live your life that way,
I'm watching the laugh and smile.
Then I'm looking at how worthless I've become-
Ho I hate the world so much.
Realizing we're over for good
Is more then my heart can take.
Here's my death certificate............
Sign it with my fate!

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  • 17 years ago

    by IdTakeABulletForYou

    So sad but truthful and honest at the same time. The only problem is, the whole poem seemed to like, die when you put the "!" at the end... i'd put an elipsis(...)

    5/5
    ~Stevie

  • 17 years ago

    by Landi Cordier

    Hi, due to, well - just a slight lack of afr. i'll comment in eng! lol, thanx for the comment! i too hope u understood all of it! thanx again!

  • 17 years ago

    by **MIMI**

    Wow great piece of work, the words are really powerful and moving. a very sad story. well done,

  • 17 years ago

    by Landi Cordier

    Hi, wats the ods that you speak afrikaans? if so, could you plz vote and comment on my afr. work? thanx

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