Hi, wats the ods that you speak afrikaans? if so, could you plz vote and comment on my afr. work? thanx

Wow great piece of work, the words are really powerful and moving. a very sad story. well done,

Hi, due to, well - just a slight lack of afr. i'll comment in eng! lol, thanx for the comment! i too hope u understood all of it! thanx again!

So sad but truthful and honest at the same time. The only problem is, the whole poem seemed to like, die when you put the "!" at the end... i'd put an elipsis(...)

5/5
~Stevie