Would You?

by ABake   Dec 18, 2006


Would you love me if I was wrong?
Would you always love me just as strong?

Would you make me laugh if you knew that I was sad?
Or would you just leave me alone I you knew that I was mad?

Would you wipe away my tears after I cry?
Would you continue to love me even after I die?

Would you kiss me in the rain?
If i got hurt would you take away all the pain?

Would you lie on the grass with me and stare at my favorite star?
Would you let me be with you every where you are?

Would you call me just to say "hey?
Would you kiss me if there was nothing left to say?

Would you want to have our love any other way?

Would you tell all your friends 'yupp thats her"?
If I asked if you were OK would you just say "sure"

Would you stay with me, even if it was really late?
Would you ever tell me this isn't love its called fate?

Would you walk with me on the beach, hand and hand?
Would you lie and tell me you understand?

Would you laugh at one of my stupid jokes?

Would you love me until you could love no more?
Would you continue to love me a lot more than before?

Would you ask me if I loved you to?
Of course you wouldn't cause you know I do!

..;;Dedicated To Juan..::

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  • 16 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    Well I like your use of repetition.. It was a good poem :) you have some minor errors though.. =) You forgot to capitalize some I's xD

    Keep up the good work!

  • 16 years ago

    by wendi

    Omg that waz a cute poem...and i can relate
    5/5

    ~wendi~

  • 16 years ago

    by 2AStarOfEfinity

    That was a cute poem. I liked how you wrote it.

  • 16 years ago

    by Melody Christina

    Great poem! I love it! :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Loved In Hell

    Good poem really well written
    much love
    laura