Comments : Would You?

  • Oooooo! I love it! i can relate to it so well! keep it up! x.x.x.x.x.x

  • 17 years ago

    by Jen

    Awww lovely poem i loved it =] =] =]

    ~*~Jen~*~

  • I like this poem. It's very sweet. Great job. Keep up the good work.
    Crystal

  • 17 years ago

    by Tom K

    Thank you for your comment on my poem... I read some of yours and really enjoyed them. You have a special gift for sharing your feelings with words.. don't let anyone tell you different. Always follow ur heart girl..
    tom

  • 17 years ago

    by Birgit

    Wow.. i'm sitting here with tears in my eyes.. this is so cute =D

  • 17 years ago

    by Birgit

    Wow.. i'm sitting here with tears in my eyes.. this is so cute =D

  • 16 years ago

    by The Sky is Falling

    I love this poem it's so cute and creative. Written amazingly. Keep up the great work. 5/5
    Check mine out

  • 16 years ago

    by BREEawNUHH

    This is beautiful.
    5/5.

  • 16 years ago

    by Brittany C

    Cool poem. Great flow. I really enjoyed reading this poem. I gave it a 5/5.

  • 16 years ago

    by Kaila

    Aww super cute... i love this one!

  • 16 years ago

    by bRiNgMeToLiFe

    Wow thats really good..5/5 nice job.
    =)
    -Elizabeth

  • 16 years ago

    by Hebe

    Very sweet poem.
    Love to read it!

  • 16 years ago

    by Loved In Hell

    Good poem really well written
    much love
    laura

  • 16 years ago

    by Melody Christina

    Great poem! I love it! :)

  • 16 years ago

    by 2AStarOfEfinity

    That was a cute poem. I liked how you wrote it.

  • 16 years ago

    by wendi

    Omg that waz a cute poem...and i can relate
    5/5

    ~wendi~

  • 16 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    Well I like your use of repetition.. It was a good poem :) you have some minor errors though.. =) You forgot to capitalize some I's xD

    Keep up the good work!