Your plain as pea soup

by Braeden Monks   Dec 20, 2006


As the pain subsides, and I see a new light
My visions in my mind, dreams in the night
Get trampled by the collective group
Of judges and jurors, I'm as plain as pea soup

I walk with many but oh so alone
I'm talking and as lifeless as a phone
My voice is a soulless tone
I'm lost in a trance unknown

Where am I headed now?
I dunno but I've reached the end of town
Mute the pain, end the suffering sounds
Laughter dies with a retiring clown

How far to go?
How will we ever show?
How far to go?
No point to know!

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  • 17 years ago

    by WakingFreedom

    I liked it. Keep It up. 5/5
    Pea soup..I like that it's cute.
    (^v^) Evil Penguin

  • 17 years ago

    by Shae

    I thought it was good if you ask me... haha. Or is it my mind? No just playing. I thought it was good. 5/5

    ~Shae

  • 17 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    Oh my, oh my, oh my.
    Are you kidding me?
    Pea soup? You're joking right?
    PLEASE tell me you just ran out of something to rhyme with..
    That's just..
    Oh my....
    Otherwise, the rest is really good..But...pea soup..here we are again...pea soup....I just don't understand...Oh my....
    Yeah...I'd change that if I were you...oh my....

    xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex -No Rate-

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