Finish Me Off

by Sandra D   Dec 20, 2006


If you're going to hurt me
Just finish me off
I'd rather be dead
Than have to explain
I go to school with bruises all over
And I really can't handle it
They ask me what's wrong
And what happened last night
I tell them it's nothing
And sorry for the fright
This is the hardest part for me
Living with the bruises
Lying to my friends
Losing every battle with you
It won't bother me if it ends
So if you're going to hurt me
Please just finish me off
Because I'd rather be dead
Than lie to them

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  • 16 years ago

    by Paralyzed

    I like this one, I am glad I picked it. Very dark and deep, such sadness behind it. I really like the title as well and the way you used it through the poem. You did a good job with this piece. Nice work.

  • 16 years ago

    by WrittenInTheStars

    One word. Amazing. I read this like ten times because it's so good.

    P.S - I really hope this isn't happening to you. If it is feel free to talk to me.

    <3 Bethany

  • 16 years ago

    by Beautiful Forever

    Great poem! The flow was amazing, the concept was so deep, and the way it was written worked so well! Truly one of the best poems I've read... Simply because of the emotion you've shown! 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Spirit

    Wow
    sorry but it is all that i can say
    wow
    :~)Sam

  • 16 years ago

    by LuvLyLynn

    Wow... This was really intense and sad...But I loved reading it...I just hope it's not real...But I give this a 5/5 because of the rhythm and the flow was wonderful...keep on writing and be strong... ^_^

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