Excellentpoem, you are very good at writing, and there's really nothing to criticize...is this a true story?

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5/5 xxDeLie

This poem made me want to cry. it is definatly a great poem though. very powerful. My son lives in a daddy less world. :(

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I like this poem a lot.
Its so sad.
I'm almost in tears- and thats not as easy as it sounds.
Wonderful job.

Beautiful! The flow and rhyme is impeccable. What a wonderful heartfelt poem for your little girl.....I can feel the love in the lines. Debbie

Wonderful and beautifully sad poem. xx

This poem wis so beautiful. It made me really want to cry. I am lucky cuz i have both my parents and i dont know what i would do if i lost one of them. they are my best friends.
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This brought tears to my eyes, it was beautiful! :)