Passing away the pain

by Michelle18   Dec 25, 2006


All alone she sits and stares,

at someone who was never there.

he had her hooked like a drug,

feening for more of his useless love.

she should've known behind his eyes,

he only wanted to make her cry.

he pushed her further and further everyday,

until finally she had to break away.

he only wanted to hurt her inside,

and pushed her so far she wanted to die.

she has no reason to be in this world,

she knows he loves another girl.

she sees the sleeping pills on the counter,

she begins to cry louder and louder.

she starts to take handfuls of pills,

not even caring how it will feel.

as she breathes it really hurts,

she didnt think this was how it would work.

she didnt think she would feel the pain,

now she just tries to scream out his name.

as she lays almost passed out on the floor,

she grabs another bottle and takes some more.

she screams out, \"how much pain can i take,\"

how much more of this painful heartache.\"

now as she lays completely passed out on the floor,

the pain is gone, there is no more.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Nix

    You could wrote this poem in stanzas. It would be better and easier to read. I don't like topic. 4/5

  • 17 years ago

    by tayXcore

    This one is really good have you ever won any competitions???

  • 17 years ago

    by brittany

    Wow!! ur very talented def keep writting 5/5 im gonna add you to my favorites lol

    brittany

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    I loved this!
    I thought the wording and rhyme scheme worked very well and I thought the whole piece flowed nicely.

  • 17 years ago

    by Italian Stallion

    Very well written. The choice of words and the rhyming where well used. Although the structure could be better, perhaps using stanzas would help.

    Peace, Joe