Great job!!! you're definitely on my favorite's list!!!

Wow michelle this is the best poem you have ever written [considering i have read almost all of them!]..lol. i love it.

Great work, Thankyou for all your comments

GA

Out of all the poems ive read so far from you..i like this one the most..what a nice flow..keep up the good work.

Very good hehe :] 5/5

Very well written. The choice of words and the rhyming where well used. Although the structure could be better, perhaps using stanzas would help.

Peace, Joe

I loved this!
I thought the wording and rhyme scheme worked very well and I thought the whole piece flowed nicely.

Wow!! ur very talented def keep writting 5/5 im gonna add you to my favorites lol

brittany

This one is really good have you ever won any competitions???

You could wrote this poem in stanzas. It would be better and easier to read. I don't like topic. 4/5