Comments : Strong

  • 17 years ago

    by Curry

    This reminds me of bobby=( but i like it!=]

  • 17 years ago

    by dollwithafrown

    This was really enjoyable to read. Very good emotion conveyed. Nice work.

  • 17 years ago

    by bon

    Good job, nice flow

  • 17 years ago

    by Mousie

    Really a nice poem, i felt the pain... you might wanna go a little deeper into things next time though, just try it... nice job

  • 17 years ago

    by Stephanie

    Very nicely done.
    Emotions done well, flow was perfect, and you described everything great. Another fantastic job, keep it up! 5/5

    Stephanie

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    Well you are very talented! Really enjoyed this one also. Excellent word choices. Great job!

  • 17 years ago

    by Taylor

    Ok, so I didn't read it. Sorry. For some reason the whole skipped-line thing really bugged me. Maybe its just me.. I'm sure it was great though lol!

  • 17 years ago

    by Landi Cordier

    I pray to God that he'll be okay

    i like this poem, its real nice! well done!

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    I really liked this one, I thought it flowed really well, and the wording really pulled me into it.
    Good job.

  • 17 years ago

    by RJ

    Great poem...

    RJ

  • 17 years ago

    by Sandra D

    You're a talented writer! i could really relate to this poem, love it!!!!

    *Shawte*

  • 17 years ago

    by BECCA lessTHANthree

    Wow.. this is an amazing poem.. i have nothing to say about it nothing to critique.. its just WOW! i love it!

  • 17 years ago

    by Princess of snow

    The wording in this poem is very strong...
    it has a unique meaning =)
    one of my favs that you wrote..

  • 17 years ago

    by Brittany

    Hey girl wut r u talkin about when u say u can't write poems u can and u do a darn good job af it !!!!!!!!!!!
    lol p.s my name is brittany and i am 13 i love 2 write 2 some time sit is the only way u can get ur fealeans out read some of my poems and tell me wut u think ttyl bye bye

  • 16 years ago

    by Brittany C

    Great poem. I loved the simple formate it made it easy to read. I also liked the word choice. 5/5