"Courage found me in your body.
Love found me in your heart.
Hope inquired me in your hand.
I knew you'd avoid from the dark."
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^^ Loved that stanza.
I dunno if you were trying to make it all rhyme or just some parts...[I dun really like poems that rhyme then don't rhyme, then rhyme again] But yours was great regardless. I love the way you wrote this. I'm not very fond of love poems...I think you just changed my mind though. ;P Excellent write! Never stop!! Take care.

`Liz

Very good poem!!! 5/5 !!!!

Hey sorry! i would've posted a comment yesterday if my computer hadn't froze. anyway, i loved this poem. wouldn't it be nice if everything always ended with love? heehee! ^_^ anyway, that was a good poem! it was deep and the words were smooth and flowed really well.

5/5! great one!

A very romantic free flowing poem. I like your choice of words

Once again... i love this one. amazing. i love the way you express your feelings. great job. please keep it up. i hope to read more from you :)

You are deeply in love, lol.
your words are so beautiful, and written so greatly like always, it shows a true love, keep it up. another 5/5 from me.

This says it all....

This is beyond what words speak.
The essence of my hearts love.

These lines set the tone for the whole poem....how romantic and beautiful. I love the flow and tone of the entire poem. Good job! 5/5

What a beautiful poem.Excellent write.

Amazing job on this one. I really liked it alot like the other one. I think there's a new shakespear in this site && your very good at writing. Very talented. I like how the both poems connected even though some people couldn't tell && you probably didn't do it on purpose but each of your poems i read at the end it's always holding your hand && becoming something more like being together forever && all. very nice.

keep it up. keep on writing. love always and forever.

Very romantic and intense, great job.

I love this poem, it goes together very good, its a 5/5!!! keep it up!!!!

I like your choice of wording
it totally complemetes the poem
GREAT JOB...=)

Nice poem, i thought it was deep and lovly and you had a very good wording choice

---tara

Another amazing poem! i love how u word ur poems, great job! 5/5...im addin u 2 my favs! i love ur work=]
xx love