June we all feel like we have failed someone in our lives. Written well this poem.

5/5

BlAcK RoSe

I can say i agree with Black rose, You've written well i also give you 5/5 because you've earned it.

your friends are right about your poems!
you are a good writter, and i am a real fan of your work!

i hope you will keep on writing,

Cheers!

This is good though i think maybe work on eliminating the forced rhyming because it does detract away from the poem. You could even try writing without rhyme, i think your ideas here would sound very good in free-style poetry. Keep it up :)

I Love this one. Its really meaning full. i hope everything gets less stressful for you. but great poem

Thats a good poem
5\5

I felt this poem mean much more than a poem. I understand it deeply. Great job.

Very touching

Very well written, I loved this poem. I can relate with everything except the kids...