Wow! thats so gud! luved the rhyme pattern! 5/5!

I liked this one

Wow...this poem is amazing. I have felt this so many times and you really captured the essence of the situation. I love this poem and its my favorite of yours. 5/5

LoveloveloveloveLOVE it. Why I have not read your old stuff yet is beyond me, I absolutely loved this piece. Every line stood out in some way, every stanza left me more breathless. Great job.

5.5
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