This poem seems to flow straight from your heart. While reflecting the romantic thoughts of a desired love. as you look deeper into your soul you find the faith to accept your fate

This is so sad Joe, but ends on a hopeful note. The poem has good flow, I especially like this part:

My heart was shattered
When you said lets just be friends
But overtime, I came to realize
Friends is better than loosing you

I know many people when they lose someone in a relationship would rather keep them as a friend then lose them forever.
Very nice job. 5/5

This is very good joe, i know exactly how you feel, sorry. 5/5!!! great poem.

Joe, this was so sad!! I can relate to this so much. A lot of people, actually, can relate to this. Thats what makes it a great poem. Stay strong!! take care!

-` Poetess

Wowwwww gr8 really gr8 so real

5/5......

God bless u

Hmmm reminds me of my friend. somethine he would say. 5/5.

Xcellent poem, and to me it's 1 of your best poems and I think it is because you really feel this. I hope you feel better and again....XP

Wow...It's an amazing poem! great job!! snaps all around !! lol.

Another great one. *smiles* really fab.

Nice Joe....well written, thigs do happen, or not happen, for a reason.

Joe, I am really sorry about you and Liz falling out. Remember, there are still a lot of people who care about you. Don't give up. I liked the poem, it touched me. Especially because my boyfriend and I are hitting hard times right now. Anyway, I wouldn't change a thing. Nice write. 5/5

Very nice poem, the emotions run deep...take care hun xox

I became quite emotional as I was reading your poem and that's not a lie, cos you see I've been going through some rough patches, in terms of "love". Anyway, I really liked your poem, it had a great impact on me. It made me realize that things DO happen for a reason...
=)
5/5

I really like this peom. It got me really emotional at some parts. My favorite part is "My heart was shattered
When you said lets just be friends
But overtime, I came to realize
Friends is better than loosing you". It made a lot of sense to me. Keep writin. You are talented

Awwww Joe *hugs the Italian man* Very good poem hun 5/5 and you're right....Everything does happen for a reason.

Aw Joe.

This is very sweet.
5/5

N-G-C-S.

Now I am very confused on your affairs Mr. Jooe. Well the emotion and heart were very well written into this poem.. as was the depth.

As a wise man once said..''Waiting will bring nothing but sorrow, but can always bring everything you could need for tomorrow.''

I never got those lines at first, but always seemed to come back to them at the end of the day. Hope you do the same.

OoO wow!!! i loved it! it reminds me of one of my ex-bf. they told me that same thing keep up the gr8 work!!!

Awwwww this is so sad! something like this happened to me before and it does hurt so i do know the pain that is in this poem its hard to be just friends.. i love this poem.it has so much emotion. great job!

This was an excellent poem... i love it, i can relate in some ways, it's beautiful, really touching. i loved the flow, and the wording was great, it all was so nice... 5/5