It's so true, the one thing that makes us the happiest is the one thing that hurts us the most inside, love really is the greatest thing of all, but sometimes it's just the opposite, excellent write 5/5

Wow, it's so short, but it really hits you hard, very touching... it's the entire cycle in very few words, but it was a wonderful job, i loved it. 5/5

This is short, but i love it!!! it's so true, and everyone knows it. i like how you put repeat at the end of it, it made me laugh (in a good way)
great job!!

Forever*Yours

This has great struacture and the words you used are unique.

i loved it, just like all the other members who read it. 5 from me too.

David

It was short and simple. Dpn't get me wrong simplicity is good, but I do prefer more indepth poems myself (just a personal prefference). It's sad that in most cases this poem is right, no one wants it to be, but it is.
Thanks for sharing.

This was soo simple and sweet like the instructions on a shampoo bottle...thats what came to mind wen i read it..well in ac=nycase..brilliant:):)5/5

Wow another great write. I love it. It is short however, I'd like to see it a little longer maybe. Other than that wonderful job.

Peace, Joe

Okay honestly .. i LOVE this poem... i the structure is very differnt but in the end it was WONDERFUl.. clever and unique.. a very enjoyable read

This was so powerful, nice and short. so unique. i loved it.

much love and many kisses,
bex

Definately unique and im liking the repeat factor because it really works and you seem to come to a different meaning everytime you re-read it! I love it! very creative =) 5/5!

Wow. It made me think. lol and sooo true. sigh I like it. Sooo, kudos 2 u! hehe

In the last line, bliss intensification.. it almost sounds like an underlying "rinse" as if to say, rinse and repeat. (:

i like it.

Tom

This was such a truthful poem. Loved the ending word of "Repeat" It makes people thing about love and life. A greatly written piece which was short but sweet at the same time. Amazing. Keep up the great work. You have talent. ~mel

From one side to the other... magic!!!
another amazing poem.. good job dear. i love the word choice and style of this one as well .. very cute
<ang
5/5

OMG!!! i love this poem
I love all your poems i have read
you have a very goood talent for this!!!
It was absolute perfection!!!

This was emotional and yet so simple. I can only imagine going through this over and over again. Man, it hurts. 5/5

Very different structure,
It suites the poem.
Good job.