I love this poem, wow! 5/5. i love "will you make me suffer? can u make me scream?" hope u keep this up, if u cud check out some of my poems it wud be appreaciated, thanks

Wow! Very morose! And very moving. Great job, 5/5 for sure! :) Keep it up!
~Midnight Sun

Very gripping piece. Wonderful job. *5/5

Great poem! i really loved it!! ure a really good writter..

5/5 !

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I was not expecting that when i clicked on this, in a good way! Wow. That is incredible. The rhyme, i dunno, it just fits the poes so perfectly. The message is carried without repetition and the first two lines are just so unique combining them in such a way. er anyway.

Thankyou for commenting on my poem! It means so much.

Jem

Wow.. that is a really good poem.. I ike it..:D

This poem is just too good to be true... keep writin dark poems, they're really good!! :)

That is such an awesome poem, so dark, I love it 5/5 x

I really love this stanza especially..

Rip apart my heart and soul
Make me feel the pain
Make me feel all these things
So I know I'm sane

That's a wow. Pain is my favourite. :))

When I read this poem, it took my breath away. SERIOUSLY. Keep writing!

Nice poem. XXX

Nice poem it was really great and keep ^ the good work!i only wish to be as good as u 1 day

love,liv hopefully u can comment/read/rate my poems! <3333 they r mostly about my friends and life/love <333

Nice poem it was really great and keep ^ the good work!i only wish to be as good as u 1 day

love,liv hopefully u can comment/read/rate my poems! <3333 they r mostly about my friends and life/love <333

Amazing..
that was really good..
i liked it alot...
pain makes everything better lol
Great Job.. =]]

Sara

Wow...there was so much emotion in that poem! i loved it it was sad but the words were perfect 5/5

Wow!! i loved it! its just... indescribable!
5/5!
xo

They just keep getting better. What a treasure to find.

Oh u r really talented...Ive nvr read such a perfect poem..U rockkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk 5/5

Awsum poem tittle!
This is brilliant

This is beautiful, kinda paints a romantic picture for me though, its dark and lovely however

Its so short but it is so powerful. I mean dang, this piece is just fantastic. Here you have shown magnificent talent. Extraordinary job.